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Black the night that closed around me,
(Now I see!)
When I listened as He promised
Majesty.
Long I waited; still she turned and
Looked on you!
Son of few years, quickly fading:
Mortal, true.
Shadows steals across the City,
Hidden light;
I shall drown both star and candle:
Bring the Night.
See the furnace-glow of crimson?
Hear the roar?
To Doom I have brought completion:
Nothing more.
Bloody chaos breaks around me,
Unafraid;
I shall find her – she'll forget you:
Fate unmade.
But your arms are strong as iron,
Have no doubt;
Past the rail meant to save me
I spill out.
Seven times they jagged crush me,
Wrathful stones;
'Til I fall no more but lie here-
Shattered bones.
Blood-stained rise the walls above me,
Heaven marred;
As light through deep water darkly:
Radiance charred.
Ragged, now, my cloak of glory,
Seeping red;
Here in silence ends this story:
Here lies dead.
(Now I see!)
When I listened as He promised
Majesty.
Long I waited; still she turned and
Looked on you!
Son of few years, quickly fading:
Mortal, true.
Shadows steals across the City,
Hidden light;
I shall drown both star and candle:
Bring the Night.
See the furnace-glow of crimson?
Hear the roar?
To Doom I have brought completion:
Nothing more.
Bloody chaos breaks around me,
Unafraid;
I shall find her – she'll forget you:
Fate unmade.
But your arms are strong as iron,
Have no doubt;
Past the rail meant to save me
I spill out.
Seven times they jagged crush me,
Wrathful stones;
'Til I fall no more but lie here-
Shattered bones.
Blood-stained rise the walls above me,
Heaven marred;
As light through deep water darkly:
Radiance charred.
Ragged, now, my cloak of glory,
Seeping red;
Here in silence ends this story:
Here lies dead.
A poem for Maeglin's fall, exploring the motivations and possible insanity of the Noldor traitor. Christmas-fic for CrackinAndProudOfIt of FanFiction.net.
And just to clear a few things up, Maeglin is first person, Tuor is second, 'she' refers to Idril, and 'He' is Morgoth. This is also my first time writing in this meter...and Maeglin did bounce seven times when Tuor pushed him off, didn't he? I hope it wasn't three times - can't remember...
Characters (c) Tolkien
And just to clear a few things up, Maeglin is first person, Tuor is second, 'she' refers to Idril, and 'He' is Morgoth. This is also my first time writing in this meter...and Maeglin did bounce seven times when Tuor pushed him off, didn't he? I hope it wasn't three times - can't remember...
Characters (c) Tolkien
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The atmosphere of the fall of Gondolin and the character of Maeglin are transfused very well! My respect for you!